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Please give me some ideas on the cover page post: D If you saw what the pics I posted of some of that artist’s work, and get any cool ideas we could possibly use for the story please comment: D
Also, I tried to quote speech within a quote and I’m totally not sure how that’s supposed to be done but “” for main speech ‘’ for speech within a speech.
Lastly if any errors please help me point them out :d
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‘I guess people wouldn’t call me Medical Sage Fu Yuan anymore if I saw someone I could help and turn a blind eye.’ The doctor chuckled as he waved his and made a long silver needle, the first of many, appear in the air and fall into his grasp.”
“Wait! Did you just say Medical Sage Fu Yuan? The man is said to be able to cure any disease with a single touch?” Lingqi yelled, interrupting Lord Long Feng’s story as she heard the name of her idol.
“Shhhhh, let him continue….” Lord Chan Chu said to Lingqi moment before having one of the legs of his chair was snapped by a kick and a hmph from Ai.
“Yes, I’m talking about that Medical Sage Fu Yuan. I’m going to continue the story now if you guys could stop interrupting. It’s a long story and I’m only going to tell it once. If I hadn’t ruined the banquet, then I wouldn’t be sharing this tale with any of you at all...” Lord Long Feng said while Lingqi could be seen sparkling eyes full of curiosity and excitement.
“With the silver needle in hand, Medical Sage Fu Yuan began healing Long Shijie or his disabilities. As time went on, one needle turned to a hundred and a hundred needles soon became a thousand. With skillful hands, Medical Safe Fu Yuan stick a needle into every single one of Long Shijie’s meridians, acupuncture points, and essence points.
Once all of the needles were in place, Medical Sage Fu Yuan began injecting his essence into Long Shijie’s body. Channeling his essence into the place were Long Shijie’s hearing system was, the Medical sage began constructing what was never given to the young boy, eardrums, and the works. For someone called a Medical Sage, such a daunting task as granting someone the gift of hearing was finished in but a mere half an hour, before he proceeded to work on giving Long Shijie the gift of speech.
‘After I construct vocal cords, I’ll be working on restoring his eyes. Leng Yue remember to watch properly and try to take note of what I’m doing because one day I’ll be handing my title over to you.” Medical Sage Fu Yuan said with a laugh as Leng Yue watched him with curious eyes.
Hours later as Medical Safe Fu Yuan continued his handy work, Long Shijie’s white colored irises were changed to a beautiful icy blue as the gift of vision was granted to him.
‘Now that I’m done fixing his physical disabilities, let’s have a go at fixing that weakened soul of his.’ The Medical Sage said as he retrieved an ancient looking jar from his interspatial ring.
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